2nd Draft

This is my 2nd draft of my music video. The blank spaces are areas of my music video which I haven't filmed yet.

What I think went well ?
-Edits
-Colour corrections
-Fade transitions

What needs improvement?
-Not every lip syncing clip matched up correctly
-The different cameras which I filmed on is evident
-There is still a lot of gaps which needs to be filled in

Overall Comments
I am happy with the middle of my product, although the beginning and end have let it down. This is because the footage which I used in this part of my music video is not good quality. Therefore on reflection I will re-film this part of my music video.
I have spent a lot of time on echoing effects and face wipes which has proven to be really effective.

Peers Comments
I asked my peers to help me improve my product. This is what they said :
Sophie =
I think you need to change the locations as there is too much of the white background"
Sophie S =
" I really like your music video but I think there is too many medium close up shots. You could try more camera framings"
Chloe =
"I really like the way which you have used edits and the models make-up looks great. To improve I would like to see more movements from the models, although your cinematography such as tilts is
really good "